Assignment #1 Final in progress - Marian's

Hi guys,

I'm still working on the promo illustration, but I just wanted to check with you guys at the in progress stage. Right now I'm building on the underpainting and the eyes aren't quite finished yet and the hair needs highlights still.

It's in oils so it's still wet and I can't make a good scan yet, so I tried to take the best pic I can using my mac cam.

Thoughts on color? I'm not quite happy with the dark background and I'm not sure how to go about it.

Help anyone?

This is Cathy.
I was wondering if you guys could critique an image that I'm working on.
I don't want to interrupt this assignment, so I want to ask beforehand.
Critique, yes or no?

Hel'z new card

I started a new sketch for my card, trying to make it a little more visually interesting. I'm not so sure about the placement of the speech bubble or the smoke cloud yet. Other Suggestions? Comments?

Final?

I don't really know that this piece will be my final, so I want to work on it more. What do you think?

Assignment #1 Cathy's

Finished!

Now looking at it, feel like it should have some color.

I'll revise it and put it up again.



Assignment #1 Revised Sketch - Marian's

Hey y'all, finally got around to getting the revised sketch done. Still not sure how I want the hair to fall exactly. Do you guys think more hair falling across the real face could work or would that be distracting?

Front:

Back Version 1:

Back Version 2:

Jennifer's Final Sketch

Sorry for the delay

Here is my final sketch. I simplified the illustration a little bit; the bee in the front was a little distracting What do you guys think about the font?